Tuesday, November 10, 2015

short story slam, memory, childhood play toy, and yugen haiku


r is for red radish


The Tuesday Platform

 Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques #18 Yugen haiku

an ongoing seesaw
bumping high and low
ups-downs

two cute hands 
clapping loudly for Lynch
left-right

a fresh radish plant
muddy from wet soil
red-green

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brown furry bear
a soft toy for Prisca Blair
the sweet childhood affair

the sweet childhood affair
as real toads bunny hop the pond
what beautiful rebound

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Imaginary Garden With Real Toads

22 comments:

Gillena Cox said...

love your haiku verses Lucinda, i'm happy you dropped by my blog today

much love...

carol l mckenna said...

Lovely photo and delightful haiku ~ I do haiku on Friday with Haiku MY Heart ~ you might like it.

Happy Week to you,
artmusedog and carol

Melody Steenkamp said...

We have them in our garden and pond .... sometimes i like them, sometimes i don't
Your photo and haiku are great !


Have a nice abc-day/ - week
♫ M e l ☺ d y ♫ <abc-w-team)

Malia Craig Tagg Lawrence Page said...

tender red radish.

photowannabe said...

Love your red radish haiku.

Jim said...

Nice haiku groupings, Lucinda. I liked your covering the two axes, then skipping to colors, red-green. I was expecting the third axis, in-out.
The radish arrangement is pretty, as good as flowers.
Thank you for visiting my "Late night TV" poem.
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Reader Wil said...

Wonderful photo of the tree frogs. My daughter in Australia has got a lot of them on her land. The tiny baby ones are cute.
Have a great week!
Wil, ABCW Team.

Buddah Moskowitz said...

These were delectable like little pieces of sushi!

humbird said...

Nice haiku, moving and playful, joy!

Roger Owen Green said...

NOT my favorite veggie!

ROG, ABCW

thotpurge said...

a fresh radish plant
muddy from wet soil
red-green

You've captured the image very well...

Arnoldo L. Romero, MLA said...

I love how much can be captured in the few words it takes to write Haiku. Happy ABC Wednesday! #24

Gattina said...

Nice Haiku, and I love reddish !

Lea said...

My husband loves Radishes. Grew them in our garden one year. Hope to do so again

Carol Campbell said...

Enchanting!

Fatiha Kabena Storm Snyder Brothers said...

excellent.

Linda Eugenia Denise Brin Korbetis said...

outstanding.

Trubes said...

I love radish, particularly cooked a la francaise....
sautéed in butter and black pepper and served as a
side for sweet cured bacon, fried free range eggs and
garlic mushrooms...a breakfast with a twist..deliceaux !

The pictures of the frogs are superb too !

Di.
ABCW team.

Benjamin Kingery Loomis Roy Moore said...

excellent.

Su-sieee! Mac said...

I read them first as two different poems. I liked them as long poems and as separate haikus.
The View from the Top of the Ladder

Forest Pirate said...

Unique style.

Georgia Koch said...

What a fun set of haiku! Lovely :) Bastet