Saturday, February 14, 2015

haiku on Train

sharing with
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2015/02/carpe-diem-sparkling-stars-18-john.html
and thursday poets rally week 80

graveyard leaves jump
and midnight shadows listen,
puff, puff, choo, choo, often.
.
yangzi river stands,
above Tie Si Yuan railroad tracks,
the train of technology.
.
smoke dances DISC,
wheels roll horizontally,
heartbeats of train catchers.

17 comments:

Janice Adcock said...

Very well done.

PirateGunn said...

Really into the 'nitty gritty' there' haiku you can feel

Kristjaan Panneman said...

Welcome at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai Lucinda, what a joy to see a new name at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. You did great with this theme of trains. Thank you for sharing.
By the way I am your host at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. Hope to see you here again.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

The macabre dance in the graveyard somehow appeals to me!

Train for All Seasons

Sheila Todd Julio Hallelujah Monduwan said...

lovely.

Amelia Googles Sharon-Stein Wilson said...

love the train of technology.

Madeline Terry Camille Nat Brownback said...

wonderful.

Benji Barratt Clark Twohill Sullivan said...

excellent.

Cindy Gary Murray Tomblin Bullock said...

love these.

jazzytower said...

I like the movement in these. I especialy liked the first one. Nicely done. And welcome!

Layne Gerald Wade Cutts Hansen said...

lovely imagery.

Sheryl David Tanya Page Raun said...

what sound bites on train, well done.

Anne Emerson Sharp Block Bloomberg said...

excellent job.

Marcie Barack Lankford Ramsey Constantin said...

well done job.

Iremonger Marty JacoBus Quinlan Pickens said...

powerful imagery.

Optimistic Existentialist said...

Great job! This is awesomeness :-)

Mimi Brad Sheng Pallin Henry said...

powerful.